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Reflection CH 5 :RUNAWAY:

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I'm not just alone out here, I'm scared. I want to go back… I didn't mean what I said. Believe it or not, somehow I know 5 didn't mean it either.
"What's the USE? It's not like things'll be different if I go back now. 5'll still be mad and 1 will still deny that he sent 2 out here to die!!!" god, I hate this! I hit the ground and pounded my face into the dirt. Emotional breakdown, yep, it usually hurts more because I hit my head on the wood flooring in my room- my OLD room, the one I had when I was 'human' and still considered a girl.
Was it not obvious that I was one? The voice, the behavior, the over-emotionality… whatever, it doesn't matter now. I'm away from it now. It didn't feel right though.
I lifted my head from the dirt and dusted away the dirt. I held onto my key, I almost forgot I had it, "what did I do wrong? I'm just trying to stand up for what I believe in… I know 1'll admit it sooner or later…" I'm not turning back now, not now, "Not ever."
Not even if 5 came to- "6!!!!! Where are you!!?!!?"  
Oh my GOD.
"6, I'm sorry! I didn't mean what I said back there! Please, 6 just come back! You could get hurt out here!!!" I know he's right but I'm just SO mad at him!
This would've helped two seconds ago before there was a beast about to grab me. I noticed its shadow hovering overhead before I even had to time to turn around. "Oh crap-"it grabbed me and flung me across the broken cement, "5!!!! HELP ME!!!" I squeaked before it grabbed me again.
"6!!!!" I heard him scream back. My heart pounded, if he didn't hurry, I was about to be machine food (May I remind you I was very human once and have seen this movie). It gave me chills just thinking about it.
The machine started pounding away with me in its clutches, "6, I'm coming!" 5 reassured me. I wanted to see him. Oh, look, there he was, standing in the open, unarmed.
We're both about to die.
"5!" I cried out before it gripped me tighter. It bounded off, leaving 5's figure in the distance, which was now chasing me.
"5!!!" I reached toward him in the distance.
He didn't stop until his hands met mine, "its okay, 6, I've got you!" he locked his position on the broken pavement. The beast dug his claws into me, tearing inside. But 5 wouldn't let go, even if that meant hurting me more for the beast to let go.
The beast hurdled up another pile of pavement, 5 yanked me out of its claw and scarred me down my side. I landed safely in 5's arms as he skidded down the mountain of broken pavement while the beast followed us. He skid us under an overhanging piece of wood.
"I think we lost him, you alright?" he panted.
"I'm okay…" lies, have you SEEN the gash in my side?
He tried to smile, "lemme see, "he asked, referring to the gaping tear in my side. So I carefully moved my hands away from it.
OH THE HORROR- wait, that's right, no blood, but believe me it's just as painful.
5 ran his hand down the side of it, "OW, don't DO THAT. Hurts." I complained.
He abruptly stopped, "S-sorry…" he scooped me back up in his arms, "I can't fix this here, we're gonna have to go back, kay?"
I looked away in silence for a sec, "o-okay…But what about 1?"
"You leave what he has to say to me, you need to take it easy."
"fine." I still felt bad about what I had said earlier, "H-hey, 5?"
"What is it?"
"I-I didn't mean what I said earlier, I was just irritated, that's all."
He lifted me and we left the overhang, "I know, I didn't mean what I said either, you're stronger than I thought. Hell, you survived this, didn't you?"
I perked up slightly, "you're right," I rested my head on his chest, "please forgive me, though. I won't feel better until you do."
He chuckled, "fine, I forgive you, 6."
I smiled, "good."
AWW! How sweet is he?
CRAPTASTIC last sentence but whatever.
GAH! I wanna go hug 5 and kiss 'em right on the cheek!
*sips her tea and eats her source crackers*

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Really, the idea has merit. ^^ you should really explore where the real six is as well. If the protagonist is in his body then does that mean he's in her body?

Is he in the real world or there in the 9 world?

Is his conciousness buried down in some hidden corner of her mind? will he resurface later?

Seriously, fleshing out the plot a bit could really help turn your, fluff-fic into something really special.

Keep writing, you're doing well. ;)